fredag 24 januari 2014

My book

"My book is about Joey, its a guy, I think he is about 15-16 years old. In the begining they are sitting in a park and drinking cider. A guy who is called Skeleton is shitty to Ema (I think she is named so), Ema is a really good friend to Joey, theirs friendship started when they was young, Everyone was afraid for her, one day Ema and Joey met in the bus and when they went of Ema and Joey was fighting, Ema told him that he was a good fighter and after that they was friends. Well, well, back to the story. Skeleton was calling Ema fat and so on, Ema got angry and hitted Skeleton in his face, Ema and Joey leaved Skeleton in the park laying on the ground."


2 kommentarer:

  1. What's the name of your book?

    What's wrong with this sentence:
    "theirs friendship started when they was young." (Two mistakes)

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    1. I will look after the name, I don't know..

      "Theirs friendship began when they were young"? :)

      Radera