fredag 24 januari 2014

"Midnight, on the bridge, come alone" - Random writing

This story is about me, my name is Andrew and I'm 16 years old. Its monday and right now I'm eating some candy and watching a movie. I heard footsteps outside my door but I didn't care. When the movie ended I was going to lock my door, a letter layed on the floor. "Midnight, on the bridge, come alone" it said.

2 kommentarer:

  1. What a good short story:) It's nice to see that you know when it's supposed to be -ing on the verbs (eating, watching).

    What's wrong in this sentence?
    a letter layed on the floor.

    SvaraRadera
  2. "A letter lay on the floor?"

    SvaraRadera